Not Too Short Lines
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Burning
If feelings had colors I am crimson
and hot as the habaneros
swimming in your soup
begging to be devoured
with that yellow egg yolk
challenging your lips and mouth.
Tonight I view you as blue opaque
radiating the milky way in your eyes
and the ardor of that angel smile
innocuous but affecting, effecting, transforming
I ache in this nagging state
of discontent
this intense yearning, this warming flame.
I recognize the ware wolf in me
set it free, tame me, enable me
to deliciously prey on thee.
Rain over the drought of my passions
taunt me again with the stars in your eyes
let not the dawn interrupt our feast
for the heat in my eyes should suffice
for us to ignore the peeping sunlight.
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yeah, let us ignore the "peeping sunlight".. LOL!
@de bugs- That is the main gist of the lyrics isn't it? reading it half asleep or dreaming. I'm THERE! BOO!
@NATG, I have something for you too. Good AM:) whatever dance I make o do in my life, whatever else that I may do in my life... you'll always be something new in my life fron now on.... NOODLES! :)
Nice addition today! Such passion, delightfully desiring and poetic wording!
@NATG: You know..I think you might like to try the Wacom Intuos4 digital drawing pad..it's great..and it's a flat tablet you draw on and will easily hook up to your MACs...and you can take it anywhere and do your fabulous delightful and engaging doodles, too!
It's a great tool and a bit easier to use and concentrate on your art because it lays flat vs your upright monitor..
I think you would like it indeed...
Looking forward to more of your beautiful, clever and witty art...
Just an idea for you...
You've always written such an interesting collection of provocative poems..
WOW...now that's something, NATG!
Unbelievable..
And your artwork....
You are so improving on that!
QudsiaP1 Level 5 Commenter 11 months ago
Wow...